(L) Lunch
The rhyme here has taken absolutely ages to work out how to do within the limited abilities of the blogger post-creator/ editor! Absolutely ages! And, I bet when I publish it's going to be a right mess, and totally incomprehensible. Well, there's no way of knowing until I take the plunge....
This rhyme is all about layout (....oh, and some pretty disgusting monsters) !
So, here goes... let's see if it worked!
[ Poem Lunch removed for publishing Aug 2017
other rhymes from this collection now on Amazon A-Z Monsters (not) For Bed]
other rhymes from this collection now on Amazon A-Z Monsters (not) For Bed]
(Just for you, Frolicsome Kid!
I took a screen-shot of it (don't know why the heck I didn't just do this in the first place!!! :-D )
I took a screen-shot of it (don't know why the heck I didn't just do this in the first place!!! :-D )
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34 Comments:
oh well, it's not too bad... could've still done with some tweaking, but I've had enough for tonight! :-D
So, hope what I was trying to achieve is recognisable!
Wow! You did it! Very complex, but cool! Don't ask me to follow suit..too hard for me!
And quite the lonesome nonesome!
But ya winsome and ya losesome!!!
And we all complainsome!
:-D lol! How on earth did you do that, MOI? You got your comment up, even whilst I was still messing about with it!! Clever! :-D
This rhyme is full of more white full stops than you can imagine! :-D But, at least I now know how to seperate stuff!
(my verification code is typyty - like it! :-) )
Hi r-d-kitty! Nice to see you again!
It took a long time to twirl these into shape, I'll tell you! :-D When I got it right in the post-writing screen they looked right, but if I wemt to preview screen they'd jumped out of line. Then, when I got it right in preview, I published & they jumped even further out of place!!!
But, oh what a sense of accomplishment I'm now feeling, having produced but a few lines!! :-D
cute! i love it! and you did get it with the editor...cool!
Hiya Mystic - fun, don't you think? Yup, all with the editor. I had thought of scanning it in, and if this hadn't worked I would've. But it's better this way... though I haven't checked how it comes out when on Explorer (that sometimes rearranges things a bit on mine...)
Good to see you again - hope all's ok!
sweet, muchos kudos.
really interesting :D
Hello, Brooklyn Frank, good of you to visit!
Thanks Deepak Gopi!
Yeah, I want some
though not sure altogether sure what I might be getting - lol!
I think explorer did what you bid
dribble, slobber, squelch, gobble and belch
:-D Quasar9
I think half my comments on other blogs have gone that way too!
Hi Annelisa,
You've got me spinning with that calendar link. lol!
PS - forgot to mention
Beautiful photo of a country lane
I love strolling or riding along them - just hope the traffic drives slow when they come round the bend
I thought about using the atom one myself, but my daughter wanted it! :-)
Re the country lane - Are you joking? Even knowing that around every corner a car might be met coming the other way, the traffic is still way fast... but surprisingly, I can't remember ever hearing of an accident down it!
I love monsters...;-)
Thanks for your post and if you paste in this address, you can check out what our Moroccan house design looks like. Hope you like it! http://moroccanmaryam.typepad.com/my_marrakesh/2006/10/morocco_and_the.html#comments
Annelisa...extremely kool..great job..how are the little ones doing?? better I hope. Things are starting to settle down to the normal chaos from the Holiday only to start gearing up for the next one..:)had an all day jewelry class Sat that was amazing..taking some new technique classes to add some interesting ideas to my designs, well its Sunday, football day at my house..yes I am a crazed fan..lol..take care..m
Oh my Marrakech!!!
Your new house will look fabulous, stupendous, and lots of other '-ous' s! Wow! Bet you can't wait until it's finished! :-D
Hi Madd!
Thanks for asking after kids - still got 2 down, each with different illnesses, and I think I'm going down with something as well :-(
So, you make jewellery? Bet you've got a blog on it, and somehow I've missed it. I'll look when I'm feeling a bit more up to it!
Football, huh? Oh dear... no hope for you then :-) Once people have the bug, seems like they have it hard! Well, hope you enjoyed the game...
hahahaaaa, that was a great poem, and as far as I can see, Looks good 2!!!
: )
I know blogger can be a head-ache tryin 2 do stuff like that!!!
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Hey I'm back not' quite myself this week ,but I'm back and so ready to start blogging again.
Hi Starbender - Glad it didn't scramble for you... I was doing a check on another pc last night, and it was eggs!
Welcome back, Hope! I'll come see you later!
Sixsome where five are womansome makes me scared...some. ;)
Steve~
Very toothsome poem. Me likes. Me hungry.
Me eat now.
makes me want to cooksome moresome
Steve Novak - With sixsome or fivesome you won't be lonesome... and maybe won't find it so loathesome!
Brian - I'm sure you won't become twigsome, when you're thinking of your troublesome tum?
Steve - I'm sure it'd be frivoulously flavoursome
Loved this poem!
Thanks Katie, Glad you stopped by!
I came late to this party, you already know what a wonderful accomplishment this was...in so many ways. I knew coming to visit you would provide the smile(s) I desired tonight.
Sorry, annelisa, I can't make out the pattern, except for the word 'gobble'. I tried highlighting the whole poem, and I unraveled 'invisible ellipses' in white, hehehe! >=)
To be late is apparently a fashionable thing - so consider yourself 'in the mode', Kilroy! :-)
Glad you liked it... although short, this was one of my favourites...
Oh, it's shame you can't get this FK - I'll take a picture of the page, and then you can see what it's supposed to be!
The main verse makes the 'L',
The word 'Dribble' makes 'U'
'Slobber' makes 'N'
'Squelch' makes 'C'
'Gobble' is the upright in 'H'
'Belch' is the arch in the 'h'
= Lunch
I'll take a photo of how it looks on my screen, and put it at the bottom...
OHHH! I SEE IT NOW!!!! I GOT IT!!! Hahahaha! Pretty cool, annelisa. Now it makes sense =D.
Wow, that was quick, FK - I hadn't even got round to letting you know I'd put the piccie in yet!
Hey, thanks for taking the trouble to put that screenshot up! It looks much more clearer when it's scaled down. Heehee =)
No probs, FK! (- maybe you can explain some of your smileys sometimes?)
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